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the darkness devours me,
there is nothing, no glint of light,
and still the silver shines.
i can feel the smooth chilly surface,
between my finger and my thumb.
my flesh and my lips part simultaneously,
the flesh gives way so easily,
the sweet metallic warmth,
heats up the cold steel,
and pools into the crook of my elbow.
it parts into two streams,
and i can feel the drip,
upon the soft white blanket.
as the pool becomes a puddle,
my mind is no longer numb,
my head feels fuzzy,
the room is spinning.
i want to lie down under the blankets.
it's cold.
i'm so cold.
i fold myself into the warmth.
sleeping beauty will never wake.
©2005-2010 *sucubusbriarrose
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Author's Comments

this isnt how im feeling exactly, ok its hard to explain. its not what im feeling directly, its what im feeling indirectly. i was reading something that had this feeling, and im kinda empathic so i picked it up and went with it. thats all. and the fact that i used to cut helped make it believable. woo.

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:iconmortuusatrum:
wow. Awesome. I think I might add this to my fav's :D

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Heres my two cents :twocents:
:iconfallen-princess:
really powerful, you've described it so well without being too graphic so well done :) i'm glad you've stopped cutting, it's such a difficult mindset to get out of but it's well worth it once you have :hug:

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...and if i'm not back in 5 minutes...wait longer!

"We shall bring the beauty of erotic poetry to the masses" :D
:iconsucubusbriarrose:
thank you so much for making this a favorite. i think its the best work i have done so far. ive never been made a favorite. once again thanks
:iconmortuusatrum:
no problem :), just keep it up

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Heres my two cents :twocents:

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